$275.00 USD

I have read and agree to the following terms and conditions:

REFUND POLICY: Cancel within 24 hours of purchase for a full refund. No refunds will be granted after 24 hours.

  • You'll need to provide a finished draft of your story. A rough draft is fine, but it should be complete and not an unfinished work in progress.
  • I will make every effort to help you strengthen your manuscript but I make no guarantee that your manuscript will be acquired by a publisher or that it will achieve a specific level of sales.
  • As the author, you retain all ownership rights to your work, including copyright.
  • My feedback will reflect my experience as a children's book author and writing instructor; you alone determine what advice to take, if any.
  • The feedback will be limited to the manuscript. It won't include advice on finding an illustrator, agent or publisher, or on any other aspect of publication.
  • I will provide detailed feedback, but I will not edit your story. If you would like to work with an editor, we can discuss how best to proceed.

Finch and Squirrel Picture Book Manuscript Review

 How it works:

 

  • After purchase, you will receive an email with instructions on how to submit your manuscript (up to 1,500 words). The email will come from me ([email protected]). 
  • The email will include a brief questionnaire asking you to provide details on your target audience, genre, theme, and any specific areas you’d like feedback on.
  • I will review and analyze your manuscript using my Storybook Blueprint to evaluate age-appropriateness, plot, character, structure, theme, and voice (and more). 
  • You will receive actionable feedback with two weeks –  I will send you detailed comments on your manuscript, with clear, constructive insights to strengthen your story while preserving your unique voice.
  • At that point, I will also send you a link to schedule your coaching call, along with your BONUS Guide to Working with Beta Readers –A step-by-step guide (with done-for-you templates) to gathering feedback from your target audience.

Know before you buy:

REFUND POLICY: Cancel within 24 hours of purchase for a full refund. No refunds will be granted after 24 hours.

  • You'll need to provide a finished draft of your story. A rough draft is fine, but it should be complete and not an unfinished work in progress.
  • I will make every effort to help you strengthen your manuscript but I make no guarantee that your manuscript will be acquired by a publisher or that it will achieve a specific level of sales.
  • As the author, you retain all ownership rights to your work, including copyright.
  • My feedback will reflect my experience as a children's book author and writing instructor; you alone determine what advice to take, if any.
  • The feedback will be limited to the manuscript. It won't include advice on finding an illustrator, agent or publisher, or on any other aspect of publication.
  • I will provide detailed feedback, but I will not edit your story. If you would like to work with an editor, we can discuss how best to proceed.
  • Your experience as a writer doesn't matter! I've worked with people who have very little writing experience / no prior experience writing for children to seasoned, professional writers who want to try their hand at something new.

Next Steps:

  • Complete your purchase.
  • Keep an eye on your inbox for the submission instructions.